Mark Mason’s drafts flowed from random ideas to a complete and interesting paper. Reading draft to draft, I could see how his thoughts grew and were refined. His purpose and feeling stayed through the entire set of drafts. I could see him more and more as I read through the drafts. I came to understand why he said what he said instead of just taking his word for it. As the drafting process continued, he pulled from the three mediums to provide proof for his words. As I read these drafts, I saw the authir change his views about different forms of a story. It made me think of how I view these things. Not only did I see the authir change, I saw the work change as well. From draft to draft, the author puts more of himself into the paper and elaborates on and supports his new way of thinking. Subtle changes really made the paper more interesting, especially when more detail is added as well.